monsieur, weâre not ready! First get rid of those flies buzzing round the table! A fine way to mess up peopleâs photos! Iâll tell you when to press the button!â
She swept her eyes across the room, hoping she could put off the moment when he took the picture. A few people entered and were making their way to the back of the bar. She grabbed her chance:
âWhatâs all this, then? Did you see that? You canât even take a photo in this country these days, not since President Marien Ngouabi died! Tell them to stop coming in for a moment!â
Then, turning her attention to us:
âAnd you two, act as though the photographer wasnât there! Especially you, Roger, whenever someone takes your photo you look all tensed up like a snail that doesnât know which way to turn! What way is that to behave? And you, boy, sit properly now. Sit up straight like a boy scout, like a boy whoâs proud to be sitting there between his papa and mama!â
Despite all these precautions, at which the photographerâs annoyance grew, she failed to notice a fourth glass on the table, to my left, in front of Papa Roger. He had bought a drink for the photographer, who had knocked it back in one, without saying thank you, eager to get on with the serious business. Instead of moving his glass out of the way, he had left it there. He seemed completely overwhelmed by his job, which, in order for him to make any money at all, required him to go all round town, from one bar to another, persuading people to have their photos taken. He wrote down your address in an old notebook and came round to your house the next day with the picture. You had to pay him a deposit beforehand. He made sure to print several copies of the same image, since if it turned out to be a masterpiece, everyone was going to want one. He was known in most districts of Pointe-Noire by now. And that day he was blowing his own trumpet in front of my parents, saying:
âIâm the only one in this town with a Hasselblad SWC! Even the Americans used one when they went up into space! Do the other photographers in this town have one? No they do not! Just me! Thatâs why they call me Mr Hasselblad SWC!â
Could anyone verify his claims? No one understood his gibberish anyway, all you saw was him pressing a button, and a flash that went off just like on any other camera. But my mother cut him short:
âStop prattling and tell us how much the photo costs!â
Mr Hasselblad SWC struck up a ridiculous pose with his camera and, in the blink of an eye, the flash exploded in our facesâ¦
The photo looks different to me now. Perhaps because Iâm looking at it in the town where it was taken. Itâs as though in Europe or in America it keeps its secrets hidden. I look more closely. My mother dominates the picture. All you see, practically, is her and the scarf round her head. She seems more relaxed than my father and I, who are both trying to squeeze into the small amount of space sheâs left us. She wanted to be the one people saw when they looked at the photo. We were just there to highlight her presence, the principalâs impact being very much dependent on the involvement of those playing the secondary roles. This was clearly the impression she wished to create, with the way she is leaning slightly to the right, as though my father and I no longer existed, or as though we were intruding on what she considered her moment of glory, which she would leave for posterity.
She is looking at the camera lens with a little smile, showing she has found the perfect pose. She doesnât know Iâve got my mouth open, a blank expression, big wide eyes that seem to be asking what the point of this photo is. Normally she would have reminded me:
âSit up straight, look, weâre having our picture taken!â
Sheâd have told me to close my mouth, she didnât like this expression, considering it unworthy and
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