her studio, Jonna set up the screen, focused the projector, and turned off the ceiling light. Mari sat waiting with pen and paper. The machine began to whir and threw a rectangle of light across the screen.
âMake notes where I should cut,â Jonna said. âAnd the repeats.â
âYes, yes, I know. And when it goes black.â
Their trip came toward them. Mari made notes:
head gone to r.
jumping
fence on l.
too long beach
unnec. landsc.
people gone too fast
flower blurred
She wrote and wrote, and afterwards she didnât really know where they had been.
âThe clipping is even harder than the filming,â Jonna explained. âWhen Iâve cut it, we can add music, but not yet. Music makes you uncritical.â
âJonna, right now I want to see something with music. And without taking notes.â
âWhat do you want to see?â
âMexico. The empty carnival. You know, all the people who were too poor to ride the carousel.â
Jonna put in the cassette, an endless, mournful marimba. The picture was blurry and shaky at first but gathered itself suddenly into a long, evening landscapeâthe empty field outside Mazatlán. There was the drainage ditch running out toward the ocean, reflecting a last glimpse of the sunset in a long band of burning gold that quickly died. Then the barracks, the car dump, and now, far off, the Ferris wheel with its many-colored lights that rose and sank and rose and sank.
The Konica came closer and you could see that all the little pleasure boats were empty. The picture moved over to a carousel that was also revolving and just as empty. Everything was sparkling and tempting and ready for fun, but the people strolling slowly through the carnival took no part in the amusements; they just observed. Except for some boys shooting at targets, whose stern faces Jonna had caught in a close-up.
As the film went on, dusk sank deeper over Mazatlán, the people left, but the Ferris wheel kept on turning, now just a circle of rising and falling lights. It was almost night. The marimba played on. The back of the circus tent, indistinct, some dogs rooting around in a rubbish tip.
âTerrible,â Mari said. âTerribly good. All those people who just had to go home without ... But at least they saw it, didnât they? Didnât you get the ditch at the end, too? That sparkled?â
âWait, itâs coming.â
The picture went black and stayed black for a long time. Several weak flashes of light, nothing more, and the screen was empty.
Mari said, âYou have to cut that; no one will get it. It was too dark.â
Jonna turned off the projector and turned on the overhead light. She said, âRight there it has to be absolutely black, graphically black. But you were there now, werenât you?â
âYes,â Mari answered. âI was there.â
B-WESTERN
J ONNA came in with a bottle of bourbon, a carafe of water, and a packet of Cortez cigarillos.
âAha,â said Mari, âthe Wild West. A B-Western?â
âYes. An early classic.â
The room was cold, and Mari wrapped herself in a blanket. âWhat time?â
âActually,â Jonna said. âActually, it would probably be better if I watched it alone.â
âI promise not to say a word.â
âYes, but Iâll know what youâre thinking, and I canât concentrate.â Jonna poured them both a drink. âYou think Westerns repeat the same theme over and over. That may be. But you have to understand that Americans are in love with their history, which was so short and powerful, and they describe and depict it again and again ... Are you in love with the Renaissance? What do you care about the ancient Egyptians? The Chinese?â
âNot much,â Mari said. âTheyâre just there. Or were.â
âFine. Now donât assume that Iâm defending B-Westerns, but think about it, try to
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